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THIS MAY BE MUCH TO READ, BUT IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE KICKED OUT OF THE CLUB IMIDIATLY, PLEASE READ IT!
ALSO, THIS CLUB HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH CAPTURE LINES, CAPTURE STYLERS, ETC.! IF YOU WANT TO USE IT YOU MAY, BUT I THINK IT'S BORING AFTER A WHILE
Hi, and welcome to Luner island!
Since you're new on Luner, I'll tell you some things about it.
Luner is an island formed by Darkrai many centurys ago. It's an big island kinda shaped like a moon, with 10 small islands.
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o272/markieboy12/lunerisland.gif
Places and areas:
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o272/markieboy12/rangerbaselogo.gif: The ranger base. The name of the ranger base of Luner Island is Solarens. It is in Futor Town
A: Rench Mountain area. at the top of Mt. Rench is a vulcano.
B: Desert area. This is the desert of Luner. At the right part it's a beach.
C: Porit Range. Some poeple say that only the best flying type pokemon live up there.
D: Port Rusmar. A city with more then 100 people. actualy, it's almost the only city in the region.
E: Plesing Forest. I nace forest, but it's extremely big! be sure not to get lost!
F: Lake of Life. The legend goes that 3 psygicaly conacted pokemon live here.
Islands:
1: Cormoris Island. many rock type pokemon live here.
2: Carmires Island. Water pokemon live here, but go to Cerisumes Island when it's breeding season.
3: Cerisumes Island. When it's breeding season, you can find much water pokemon here.
4: deratmus Island. Almost nu pokemon found, but you must go here if you want to go to the underground.
5: Krinkar Island. home of the steel typo pokemon.
6: serente Island: There is a big lair where fighting pokemon gather and meditate.
7: wence Island. Previously, this island was perfectly round, but then psygic typo pokemon build some more land onto it.
8: sumad Island. the only place in whole the region where poison and ground pokemon live in harmony.
9: servan Island. This island is crowed by bug pokemon, but in the center there is a flame shaped hole in the ground. are you brave enough to enter?
10: Ramsur Island. When tourists visit Port Rusmar, they sometimes can get a free boattrip to Ramsur Island. they adore the normal type pokemon.
You better keep this map with you at all time, or you don't know where your mission is!
O wait, I completely forgot to introduce myself! My name is M. Dragon Fang, head of the Solarens ranger base.
What do you say? do you want to become a ranger too? well, maybe I can help you, if you can fill in this form at least:
Name:
Nickname(s):
Gender:
Look:
Character:
1 Partner Pokemon to start with:
Look partner Pokemon:
Character partner pokemon:
Why did you come to Luner Island in the first place?:
Why do you like nature and pokemon so much you want to join?:
I also filled in this form, take a look.
Name: M. Dragon Fang
Nickname(s): M. Dragon Fang / M.D.F. / MDF
Gender: male
Look: small for his age, glasses, brown hair. wearing his solarens head outfit.
Character: Always very nice, but if you mess with him, his island, pokemon, or nature, he'll get angry easely.
1 Partner Pokemon to start with: Cyndaquil (Cynder)
Look partner Pokemon: Like a normal cyndaquil, but the flame is a but bigger and his belly is a little bit darker the normal.
Character partner pokemon: Nice, but a bit naughty. always wants to play with someone, but by doing that, he can get himself into a lot of trouble.
Why did you come to Luner Island in the first place?: I wanted to enjoy the nature, peace, and harmony.
Why do you like nature and pokemon so much you want to join?: Nature is the most important of the world, without it, the whole ecosystem woudl get out of balance and that results into world destruction! - I like pokemon very much because I think people and pokemon must live in harmony.
I have a small note about the missions. You can only go on a mission if I, Solarens head, or an Co-Head, chosen by me, give you a mission by filling in this form.
Name: IMNHP (Inster Mission Name Here Please)
Description: This is an example to let you see how this form is filled in. the description of the mission goes here. like telling what the one the mission is given to needs to do.
Place: This is the place where you start the mission. example: Mt. Rench
Ranger(s): Here you put wich members are assigned on this mission. most of the time it's just 1, but rangers can "buy"(see description below) the feature to also go on missions with another ranger.
Also a small note about your partner pokemon. You start out with 1 partner pokemon. But, you can "buy"(see descrition below) more partner places.
okay, the following may be a bit hard to understand, so listen carefully.
SHOP
This is the Ranger base's pride, the brand new shop system!
ONLY I, THE SOLARES HEAD MAY USE THESE THING EXPLAINED BELOW. IF YOU WANT TO BUY SOMETHING, YOU MUST PM ME!
After every mission, you get 1 Ranger Point, better knows as RP. It may not be much, but if you make a very good mission (long posts, fun to read, etc.) then you may get 2 RP
Now, not that I underestimate you, but the first times I want to do this on my own, so you can see how it works.
SHOP ITEMS
|> Second partner place - 4 RP
|> rank up (you just get a + behind your rank.) (you may choose the color of the +, but once you chose, the color can't be changed) - 5 RP
|> Option of going on missions with 2 rangers (both rangers must have bought this) - 6 RP
UNLOCKABLE SHOP ITEMS
||> Third partner place - must have second partner place - 6 RP
||> Fourth partner place - must have third partner place - 8 RP
||> Option of going on missions with more then 2 rangers (all rangers must have bought this) - must have option of going on missions with 2 rangers - 12 RP
KEEP AN EYE ON THE SHOP BECAUSE THERE MAY BE SPECIAL THINGS TO BUY, OR THERE COME NEW THINGS
THE MEMBER LIST:
Name: Mystery Dragon Fang
Nickname(s): M. Dragon Fang / M.D.F. / MDF
Partner pokemon 1: Cyndaquil (Cynder)
Ranger points: 1
Bought options/items/etc.:
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Rank: Ranger head
Name: Nica
Nickname(s): Nice / Bellossom
Partner pokemon 1: Torchic
Ranger Points: 1
Bought options/items/etc.:
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rank: Ranger
Name: Brian
Nickname(s): Bri
Partner pokemon 1: Wurmple
Ranger Points: 1
Bought options/items/etc.:
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rank: Ranger
RULES
All PI rules
ALWAYS use the forms
Do as a head/co-head told you to do
make long posts. A MISSION MUST LAST AT LEAST 2 POSTS.
when you're not on a mission you're free to go! you may travel the island, or just don't post.
Please put the (mini)banner in your signature. I won't warn you if you don't but it would be nice ;)
there may be changes in the rules every once in a while.
and here is the mini banner thingy, homemade by MDF!
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o272/markieboy12/PRSminibanner.gif
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just copy&paste into your sig, but don't forget o remove the * !
So, If you have questions, ask them!
Akheen
02-10-2008, 11:39 AM
Name: Nica
Nickname(s): Nica, Bellossom.
Gender: Female
Look: Young, brunette, wears skirts and tops that glitter.
Character: Really friendly, but likes to backstab people in a joking form... like Ash, but 10 times a better trainer~
1 Partner Pokemon to start with: (Damn... I have many favourites) Torchic.
Look partner Pokemon: Wears a cute ribbon... somewhere on it.
Character partner pokemon: REALLY CUTE, energetic and friendly.
Why did you come to Luner Island in the first place?: So Torchic could get stronger and beat all other trainers... and plus, there are many cute Pokémon on Luner island... TO... help.
Why do you like nature and pokemon so much you want to join?: Because nature likes me. -Shot'd- Because nature and Pokémon are destined for good things.
I'll add you, and you get co-head ship too :D
Akheen
02-11-2008, 06:00 AM
k so... you wanted me to give you a mission.
Name: Mission Play-time.
Description: You must help out Ledyba around the area by distracting them from the honey that is near by. By playing with them, it'll give the other rangers enough time to track and capture the the honey that they everyone needs for research.
Place: Servan Island
Ranger(s): MDF
Thanks Nica! I'll be on my way!
I take the boat to Servan Island, and when I arrive there there are some other rangers.
Ranger: Hey, you must be M. Dragon Fang?
I: yes, that's me! who are you?
other ranger: We're the rangers from the fiore region, we need some honey for our research. anyways, I am Chuck, this is my friend, Buck.
Buck: Hi, nice to meet you!
I: So, I'll distract the ledyba, and you get the honey, ok?
both rangers: OK!
I: come on cynder, we've got a mission to deal with!
Cynder: cynda quiuiuil!
~after some walking in the forest we pick up the nice smell of honey~
I: do you smell that cynder, that must be where the ledyba keep their honey. let's check it out.
we follow the nice smell and see some ledyba flying about.
I: hey look, there is their nest. well, it's playtime!
We walk towards the ledyba who look a bit scared.
I: no need to be afraid, I'm just here to play with you!
Ledyba: ba! ledybaaaa!
We play a while and slowly wander of a bit, but then I and some ledyba fall into some hole!
I: whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
The fall was long, and I land with my back on some hard rocks. then, everything goes black.
I: whu… where am I? Cynder?! CYNDER ARE YOU OK!
I can't see him anywhere, but I hear a weak cry coming from the right part of the cave. I walk towards the cry, and there I find Cynder laying on the ground with his flame almost out.
I: here, take this oran berry, you'll feel a lot batter then.
Cynder slowly eats the berry, and then his flame becomes bigger.
Cynder: cynaaahhh! quuuiiiiiiil!
I: before we try to get out of here, we need to find the ledyba. i thought it were 5…
cynder: quil.
I: o, 6? well then, we'll go search for them.
we explore the cave and find 3 ledyba, but the other 3 still stay lost.
Then, all of a sudden, we hear a roar behind us. when we look, it seems to be an arcenine!
I: ok, 2 ledyba, you go and deliver this message to chuck and buck
"in the center of the island, i fell into some kinda cave, there is an arcenine attacking us, please come and help!"
I: now go and deliver the message! you, the last ledyba, deliver this message to nica.
Mission: POR (prevent oil rampage)
description: in the desert area there seems to be an oil leak. your mission is to prevent the pokemon from getting stuck in the oil. after that, make sure the oil stays where it is!
area: desert area
rangers: Nica
I: okay, cynder, are you ready for a fight?
Cynder: quiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilllll!
and cynders flame becomes enormous.
Akheen
02-11-2008, 11:58 AM
The young girl grabs the nearest boat and travels to the desert area…
Nica: Um… hi?
The girl calls out as soon as she arrives on the island, nobody is around, so she assumes she has to search for people.
She begins to walk over to the place where the oil was spilt. Not sure how she would overcome the oil which would potentially harm the Pokémon, she released Torchic.
Torchic: Torrrrr~
Nica: Okay… now, can you possibly just light up a small fire? If we explode the oil… it’ll go completely away.
A group of wild Dugtrio began to dig their way over to Torchic.
Torchic: TORRRCHIIIIIC!
Torchic let out a large ember and began to run around…
Torchic fell into a oil spill.
Nica: Torchic, no! I need you. How can I save you? Wait, I know! Um... Dugtrio, come over here please.
The Dugtrio begin to walk over slowly.
Nica: Okay, thanks, can you use dig?
The Dugtrio looked at Nica sidewards and began to think she was crazy. Why use dig on oil? They'll get trapped too.
Nica: Just trust me... please.
Dugtrio: Trio~
The Dugtrio start to slowly dig their way underground. The Dugtrio come to a halt. As predicted by them, they got stuck in an oil spill.
Nica: Oh, I'm no good at this... maybe... maybe I could just reach over and get Torchic? I'm strong enough to pull myself out of the oil if I get in...
Nica looked around, she couldn't see anything except a rope which was conviniently close.
Nica: Oh yeah, this DEFINATELY will help me. This will be good... I just need something to tie this to, when Torchic gets out, we can save the Dugtrio.
A Sandshrew walked past...
Nica: HEY SANDSHREW. Come over here... are you strong, are you going to evolve anytime soon?
The Sandshrew began to squint its eyes... it was trying to evolve.
Nica: Oh, you don't NEED to... but can you still help me anyway?
Sandshrew begins to look up with a cute sort of smile.
Nica: Thanks... now... tie this around you. I'll go in, if I get stuck, try and help me.
Nica walked over closer, and closer to the oil spill. Torchic was clearly sinking into the oil, the situation wasn't going to get better any time soon.
...
I: okay, cynder, are you ready for a fight?
Cynder: quiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilllll!
and cynders flame becomes enormous.
Cynder, use howl!
Cynder: cynaaaaaaaaaaaa
I: ok, now use tackle!
Cynder uses tackle at arcenine, but even with the attack boost of howl, it doesn't do much damage…
then, all of a sudden, a leyba falls on my head.
I: hey, you're the one who send nica the mission. can you please help us out? yes? great! then use mach punch on that arcenine!
The ledyba uses mach punh, but arcenine dodges and uses ember on ledyba.
I: are you OK? great, then use bug buzz! and you cynder, you use smokescreen!
Cynder uses smokescreen and the whole cave get's dark because of the smokescreen, even cynders flame doesn;t give much light.
but since ledyba knew where to aim, she uses bug buzz `at arcenine, a critical hit!
Arcenine takes a few steps back and the smokescreen disapears.
voice from outside the cave: MDF, is that you in there?
I: you're buck and chuck right, and yes, it's me! come in and help me!
Buck and chuck jump into the hole with their partners behind them, a totodile and a squirtle.
I: hmm, with these water type pokemon, we're having a good chance!
buck: you bet! ok totodile, use water gun!
chuck: squirtle, use bubble!
I: ledyba, comet punch! cynder, rolout!
Everyone attacks and the arcenine gets hit big time! then, it flees.
I: now, time to search for the 3 missing ledyba.
as I watch chuck and buck for a while, I see they have brougt the other 2 ledyba too. and the rangers smell like honey too!
then, the arcenine comes back, with the ledyba on its back.
I: hey thanks arcenine! but, can you also tell us how to get out of this cave?
arcenine: arrrrrrrCENINE!
It launches a powerfull fire blast from its mouth that makes the ground meneath us explode. we fly up in the air, though the hole, and back to the boat.
I: well… that's one way to get out of a cave… *groan*
chuck: well, it was pretty fun though!
I: you can say that again! hahahahaha!
I: so, you've got the honey?
buck: yep.
I: what do you eactly use it for? what kind of expiriment?
chuck: we want to prove that ledybas make better honey then beedrill!
I: ALL THAT WORK FOR JUST SOME KIND OF STUPID TEST?!
buck and chuck: hahahaha! we folled you! hahahaha!
I: that's not funy! hey ledyba, you better head for your nest again, it;s getting a bit dark already.
ledyba: ledbaaa! ledyy!
I: bye! hope to see you again sometime!
I: okay guys, bring me back to futor town will you.
[MISSION COMPLETE]
[MDF GAINED 1 RANGER POINT]
Akheen
02-13-2008, 11:15 AM
The young girl grabs the nearest boat and travels to the desert area…
Nica: Um… hi?
The girl calls out as soon as she arrives on the island, nobody is around, so she assumes she has to search for people.
She begins to walk over to the place where the oil was spilt. Not sure how she would overcome the oil which would potentially harm the Pokémon, she released Torchic.
Torchic: Torrrrr~
Nica: Okay… now, can you possibly just light up a small fire? If we explode the oil… it’ll go completely away.
A group of wild Dugtrio began to dig their way over to Torchic.
Torchic: TORRRCHIIIIIC!
Torchic let out a large ember and began to run around…
Torchic fell into a oil spill.
Nica: Torchic, no! I need you. How can I save you? Wait, I know! Um... Dugtrio, come over here please.
The Dugtrio begin to walk over slowly.
Nica: Okay, thanks, can you use dig?
The Dugtrio looked at Nica sidewards and began to think she was crazy. Why use dig on oil? They'll get trapped too.
Nica: Just trust me... please.
Dugtrio: Trio~
The Dugtrio start to slowly dig their way underground. The Dugtrio come to a halt. As predicted by them, they got stuck in an oil spill.
Nica: Oh, I'm no good at this... maybe... maybe I could just reach over and get Torchic? I'm strong enough to pull myself out of the oil if I get in...
Nica looked around, she couldn't see anything except a rope which was conviniently close.
Nica: Oh yeah, this DEFINATELY will help me. This will be good... I just need something to tie this to, when Torchic gets out, we can save the Dugtrio.
A Sandshrew walked past...
Nica: HEY SANDSHREW. Come over here... are you strong, are you going to evolve anytime soon?
The Sandshrew began to squint its eyes... it was trying to evolve.
Nica: Oh, you don't NEED to... but can you still help me anyway?
Sandshrew begins to look up with a cute sort of smile.
Nica: Thanks... now... tie this around you. I'll go in, if I get stuck, try and help me.
Nica walked over closer, and closer to the oil spill. Torchic was clearly sinking into the oil, the situation wasn't going to get better any time soon.
...
Torchic: TORCHIC!!!
Nica: Yeah, hold on... I just need to find the right place to lean over and...
Nica fell into the oil spill.
Nica: Okay, now, please, help me Sandshrew.
Sandshrew then began to pull Nica back up, in the mean time, successfully grabbing hold of Torchic.
Nica: TORCHIC, USE FIRE BLAST!
Torchic looked at Nica sidewards.
Nica: Oh yeah, right, sorry, you don't know it. Please use... ember.
Torchic began to use ember... slowly the oil started exploding, Nica first made sure that Sandshrew and Torchic were pretty far away.
The Dugtrio escaped safely.
Nica: Good, so now... explode the rest of the oil?
Nica looked up above her and saw a truck dumping its oil near where some Pokémon were.
Nica: HEY. Torchic... use dig... then go close up to the truck and use ember!
Torchic did just as Nica told it to.
Nica: Oh yeah, definately... you'll need to... wait. Where did this truck come from? I mean... it has a label on the side of it. We need to wait out here for another truck.
Five minutes later, a second truck drove by. A man got out of the truck. Nica helped Torchic get down low and hide.
Man: Yeah, so how do we do this? Put lots of oil here, pretend its an oil spill and then capture the Pokémon?
A second man walked out of the truck, stroking a Tangela.
Second man: Exactly... yes. So, ready to do this, again? Actually, where IS our other truck? It definately isn't anywhere close...
Man: I think... I think that Torchic exploded it.
Luckily for Nica, the men only liked ground type Pokémon, so Torchic wasn't something they really desired.
Man: So what do we do with this stupid Torchic? Throw it to the Shuckle or the Shellos?
Second man: No... this Torchic has a partner, we'll use it to lure its partner out... then, we can get ourselves a new employee... or even better... some food for Garchomp.
Nica looked worried at the thought of being eaten by a Pokémon.
Torchic suddenly used fire blast!
Nica looked amazed that Torchic used it.
Nica: Wow... Torchic. Oh, so you killed them? THAT'S TERRIBLE... I guess though... they'll... they won't harm anyone/anything else now though...
Nica: Oh yeah, Torchic...
Torchic: Tor?
Nica: Um... nothing. Did you see off the Pokémon safely?
Torchic: Torchic~
Nica: Great... now, can we get out of here? Now that there won't be anymore oil spills.
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So this is completed, so I assume I get a ranger point? XD
Yes you do 8D
[Nica GAINED 1 RANGER POINT]
but please, don't quote your whole previous mission post.
anyways, are you ready for another mission, this on is easy.
Mission: LAWL (Lickitung Are Wanting Licks)
Description: There are a few lickitung going wild in town, and keep licking helpless people and pokemon, your mission is to drive them away, back to the forest.
Area: Futor Town
Rangers: Nica
and since I'm on nothing, I'll go relax a bit…
BTW: you don;t get points for making posts while not on a mission, but you can do it just for fun. they also don;t have a minimum length, or special requirements, so…
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I: hey cynder, want to go and play in the forest?
Cynder: cynda-quil!
I: great, and I'll take some coockies with us!
I and cynder walk to the forest, and play for a while.
I: HAHAHAHA! CYNDER! DON'T TICKLE ME! *gigle* YOU KNOW I NEED TO LAUGH OF TICKLING! HAHAHA!
Cynder: quilquilquilquil!
Cynder went on tickling, but he fell into some dry leafes, and they began to burn.
I: hell no! it hasn't rained for weeks, and the whole forest is dry! this way, the whole forest will be burned down in a few minutes!
I heard some mudkip singing nearby, so I and Cynder hurried to them.
I: hey mudkip, can you guys help me? me friend cynder axcedentaly (sp) burned some leaves in the forest, and now we can;t stop the fire from burning!
mudkip: kip?
I: yes, if you can use water gun that would be a big help!
mudkip: mudkip!
I: okay, thanks!
The mudkip followed me into the forest, and they began to use water gun, but it didn;t help much…
I: are then any pokemon around here who know raindance?
mudkip: kip, mudkip! mud!
I: a small group of old ludiculo, where are they?
mudkiP: mud *points to the other side of the river*
I: kay, thanks! cynder, you stay here and try to help the mudkip by throwing sand on the fire, since you can's swim. ok?
cynder: quil quil!
I run to the river and jump in the water. when I'm almost there, a sharpedo jumps out of the water, lands on me, and I am nearly drowning!
Oh this just seems to fun! I just cannot stay away! (can i still join?)
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Name:Brian
Nickname(s):Bri
Gender:Male
Description:Light brown hair, green eyes, white T-shirt, green vest, khaki pants, light tan skin
Personality:Usually is nice, is very clumsy and day dreams while on missions every now and then, loves pokemon and the environment.
Starting Pokemon:Wurmple (Fuzzy)
Pokemon's Description:Just an ordinary Wurmple except that it wears a pink bow around it's neck.
Pokemon's Personality:Tries to be sweet but no matter what it gets itself into some kind of trouble.
Why did you come to Luner Island in the first place?:To protect innocent pokemon/people
Why do you like nature and pokemon so much you want to join?:Because otherwise the world would be in chaos and many people would die.
k, bri! you're in! here is your first mission:
Name: RRR (Rum, Rum, Rum)
Description: There have been thieves in Port Rusmar. They stole lots of precious Lunar Rum. I want you to track the thieves, get the rum back, and deliver the thieves to the police.
Place: Port Rusmar
Ranger(s): Bri
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I run to the river and jump in the water. when I'm almost there, a sharpedo jumps out of the water, lands on me, and I am nearly drowning!
While underwater, the sharpedo starts bashing into me. then, it hits my bag and the bottle of sleeping powder inside it breaks. he sleeping power goes into the water, and the shapredo "breathes" in the water, causing it to sleep.
I swim to the other side of the river, and there I see some lombre.
I: The ludiculo shouldn't be far away now!
I hurry across some lombre, finaly reaching an old wooden hut.
I: ludiculo? are you in there?
???: co ludi…
I: come out and show yourself will you?
a small, but old ludiculo comes out, with a joung one following him.
I: there is a forest fire going on at the other side of the river, can you please help?
old ludicolo: diculo!
I: NO?! but if the fire keeps on burning the whole forest will be destryed, including this part!
joung ludicolo: LUDICULO! CULO!
old ludicolo: dicul… diculo…
I: so you'll help? great! follow me!
they follow me to the other side of the river.
I: there is the fire, now use raindance!
it starts raining, the mudkip their water guns become strongger.
I: ok ludicolo! use hydro pump!
they use hydro pump, and after a while, the fire goes out.
I: yay!
I hug the mudkip an ludicolo, and thank everyone.
the 2 ludicolo go back to their hut and the mudkip too their river.
I: well cyder, that was an exiting adventure! lets head back to the HQ.
I get off the ferry at Port Rusmar, the sun is shining and it is a beautiful day. All of a sudden two dark, shadowy figures run down an alley. I run quickly but quietly after them with Fuzzy sitting on my shoulder. After a lot of twists and turns we find a building, or more of a "thieve's den" and run inside un-noticed. Once I ran in I could hear voices, but going further away. It was hard to make out what they were saying, but I could make out the word rum in the sentence. I waited until the voices were gone. I began to walk through the echoing halls when Fuzzy began to whimper.
I:What's wrong Fuzzy?
Fuzzy:Wur... wurmple...
A strange smell that burned my eyes told us we were getting close to the stolen rum. I followed the smell for a while until I came to an empty room.
I:OK then.... this getting weird.
All of a sudden I heard something above me and looked up quickly, but not quick enough. I was now trapped inside a steel cage. A man then walked into the room.
Man:I knew at least one of you pesky rangers would come, but this time I have out smarted you.
The man then walked out.
I:(thinks to self):O.O that's it?! Great.... now how am I going to get out?
A Machoke walks out of nowhere and begins to look around.
I:(yelling):Hey! Over here! Can I have some help?!
The Machoke walk over and begins to punch at the bars, but ends up hurting his hands.
I:Well that didn't work.... ~_~ *sigh*
Fuzzy then begins tackling the bars but ends up hurting herself. Fuzzy tries again and ends up actually denting the bars out enough to crawl through. All of a sudden a light covers Fuzzy.
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(Am I aloud to make my pokemon evolve?, if not I'll change what I wrote.)
(Am I aloud to make my pokemon evolve?, if not I'll change what I wrote.)
No! it's OK, but don't do it every post please.
anyways, that's a really nice first post on you! keep on doing this good ;)
HOPPING FROGGY KISSES requested de-motion in the club. from now on, there are no co-heads anymore. if you want to become one, PM me, and tell me why you want to be one.
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well then… I bet there is some work to do…
I: *walks to reception desk* Sherry, are you there?
voice from under the desk: yes?
I: what are you doing under the desk?
voice: I'm searchig for something…
I: what then?
voice: the instruction booklet for my computer
I: come from under the desk will you! what's wrong with your computer then?
Sherry: *comes from under the desk* Oh, hi MDF! how are you? well there seems an error… I don't know how to fix it.
I: lets see… *does some things* - it's no error, you only got a new message!
Sherry: ow… hehe… I've never been very well with computers…
I: anyways, is there anything I can do right now?
Sherry: there seem to be some problems in the sewer, acording to my "message-thing". it says:
Name: SII (sewer is instable)
Description: Dear Solarens. I've discovred there are some broken pipes in the sewer. if they don't get repaired soon, they'll explode! go down the sewers in futor town.
Place: futor town
rangers: MDF
Sherry: you better hurry!
I: finaly, an official mission for me to do! okay cynder, let's go! … wait… cynder, where are you?
Sherry: I feel something hot under my desk! OH MY GOSH, THE FLOOR IS BURNING!
I: *looks under desk* neh, that's just cynder trying to play hide'n'seek… come on cynder! we've got an mission to do!
~outside the ranger base~
I: now where are the sewers? and what on earth is that horrible smell?
Cynder: qweeerghh…
Previously:
The man then walked out.
I:(thinks to self):O.O that's it?! Great.... now how am I going to get out?
A Machoke walks out of nowhere and begins to look around.
I:(yelling):Hey! Over here! Can I have some help?!
The Machoke walk over and begins to punch at the bars, but ends up hurting his hands.
I:Well that didn't work.... ~_~ *sigh*
Fuzzy then begins tackling the bars but ends up hurting herself. Fuzzy tries again and ends up actually denting the bars out enough to crawl through. All of a sudden a light covers Fuzzy.
The light then fades out and in Fuzzy's place was a Silcoon.
I:Alright!, Fuzzy you evolved!
Fuzzy:Sil, Sil, Silcoon!
I then grab Fuzzy (since she can't move since she is in a cocoon) and start to crawl under the bars. We begin going through the hall again. We finally reach a room, and on a table in the corner was the rum. I grab the rum, when I hear a voice behind me say: "Hey you punk, let go of that!". Fuzzy jumps out of my arms and tackles the guy down, letting me pick Fuzzy and run out as quick as possible. I hear voices after me as I run out and past all the twists and turns. I see the a boat ready to leave and quickly get on. The boat leaves right before the men get to it. They start yelling at me as the boat get further and further away.
I:*sigh* whew, that was close.
Fuzzy:*nods* Silcoon...
Mission Completed
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I guess I am done
Ok, I've got 2 tips:
- try not to quote THAT much
- and can you make a little bit longer posts? the last one looked kinda short.
anyways, nice work!
BRI GAINED 1 RANGER POINT
your total ranger points is now: 1
keep on going like that brian!
Invinsible Metagross
07-07-2008, 02:44 AM
Name: Hassan
Nickname(s): Hassany
Gender: Male
Look: White Complexion, quiet tall for his age, good looking, brown eye color, black hair color, wears a T-shirt and big light-blue shorts.
Character: Kind, humble, pious, loyal, friendly, clever, smart, bashful, shy and has a strong willpower... But if offended, he can get angery easily
1 Partner Pokemon to start with: Beldum
Look partner Pokemon: Beldum shines when he comes out of his Pokeball... He is far more different than a normal Beldum, his body is silver and the claws at the bottom are of a golden color.
Character partner pokemon: Beldum is adamant, shy, hardworking and determined... But if he is offended, he will attack with extreme force.
Why did you come to Luner Island in the first place?: I found this strange island not too long ago... It caught my eye and I thought that I'd explore it... And while I was at it, I loved how this island looked like, so, therefore, I decided to stay here... And I noticed that Pokemon Rangers lived and protected Pokemon and nature here too... So, I wish to join them and protect Pokemon and nature with them.
Why do you like nature and pokemon so much you want to join?: Pokemon have always been my favorite type of creatures and I have been always bedazzled by nature's beauty
welcome to the Solarens HQ Hassany! here's your starting mission:
Name: HA! (Hairless Assumtion!)
Description: In the centre of Plesent Forest is a small wooden house. Miss Shiba lives there.But here is the problem: Miss Shiba thinks the pokemon in the forest are better off without their furr! that's why she catches pokemon, "ripps off" the furr, burns it, and releases the pokemon. she uses her charmeleon for burning, so be prepared as it can cause trouble.
Starting location: Plesing Forest
Rangers: Hassanygood luck!
~continuing with his mission~
as we follow the we enter the sewers.
"holy matrimony! this case really smells fishy…" I say.
Almost without breathing we go deeper and deeper into the dark sewer. luckely cynders flames light it up a bit.
I: hey, what's that! yeah, there! in the water!
I run towards the stream of water and see 2 eyes staring at me.
I:uhm… C-Cynder… I think this is the moment to be scared, r-right?
Cynder: *nods* Q-Quilly!
I: hey, the eyes, just… d-disapearred! hmm… this requires alot of investegation I think…
A few hours later we see a little girl sitting near the water, playing with a few purple blobs.
I: Hey there! what are you doing here? it's dangerous for a little kid to play in places like this you know!
Girl: but I have my pokemon to protect me!
I: I haven't see any pokemon around here… only dirty water and these blobs you hold there.
girl: hey! my grimer aren't blobs! they are really sweet, and very loveable!
the blobs grow to the size of normal grimer, and the 2 "walk" towards cynder.
then they jump on cynder, making it immpossible for him to breathe!
I: hey girl, make your grimer stop doing that! *pulls of grimer from cynder*
I grab cynder, and then see his flame is out.
I: now you've done it! I have to hurry to the Solarens Hospital! you, girl, follow me and take your grimer with you, too! and make sure they are NOT swimming in the sewer water!
girl: so THAT's why the water turned purple when my grimer swum in it…
~to be continioud~
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