A Moltres Revamp...

[xXRushXx]

http://i18.tinypic.com/6afldzn.png
Ugh...this was meant to be revamped to D/P standards, but I don't like the result. It is a revamp, but I heavily edited the original R/B sprite, and it looks like a scratch sprite.

Now tell me on how this could improve.

[§Ellie§]

*not looking at the DP sprite, so forgive me if it's just the DP style to do it that way*

the outlining looks pretty dark imo, but some people like dark outlines so meh.

The wings also look pretty flat, and they're also kinda weirdly shaped.

The neck/head (to a lesser extent) also look a bit flat

the rest of it's nice, I like the fire and feet.