Topaz_Mew
04-16-2007, 08:10 AM
ok please dont be to harsh when critisizing but post what I need to improve on
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Dreaming just dreaming a dream that may never end....
Introduction
Kafuinu is a young female Espeon. She has a purple coat like all Espeons but in the
moonlight its shimmering like the stars. Her tail is slit like a V at the end and instead
of a ruby colored on her forhead it was a wierd Gold and Black colored gem. Her ears
were tall standing up straight with fluffs at the ends. Kafuinu`s eyes were a dark blue
that seemed to sparkle in the moonlight. Kafuinu has a scar on her left eye. You see
there was once a clan of Espeons and Umbreons. She was an exile but why no one knows.
She left the clan the night before it was demolished by a group of rouge Ninetails and
Arcanine. Kafuinu sighed as she gazed at the full moon.
"Just dreaming endlessly" She spoke under her breathe.
Kafuinu was always talking like this since she was a young Eevee. Nobody can understand
what she means. Atop a hill above the clouds with the moon in full veiw Kafuinu
sat staring down at the town below her.
"The lights are off in Goldenrod City guess I should be heading off now."Kafuinu would
always stay in one town and the same night would leave.
"Searching and dreaming," Kafuinu spoke again under her breathe,"just dreaming"
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Dreaming just dreaming a dream that may never end....
Introduction
Kafuinu is a young female Espeon. She has a purple coat like all Espeons but in the
moonlight its shimmering like the stars. Her tail is slit like a V at the end and instead
of a ruby colored on her forhead it was a wierd Gold and Black colored gem. Her ears
were tall standing up straight with fluffs at the ends. Kafuinu`s eyes were a dark blue
that seemed to sparkle in the moonlight. Kafuinu has a scar on her left eye. You see
there was once a clan of Espeons and Umbreons. She was an exile but why no one knows.
She left the clan the night before it was demolished by a group of rouge Ninetails and
Arcanine. Kafuinu sighed as she gazed at the full moon.
"Just dreaming endlessly" She spoke under her breathe.
Kafuinu was always talking like this since she was a young Eevee. Nobody can understand
what she means. Atop a hill above the clouds with the moon in full veiw Kafuinu
sat staring down at the town below her.
"The lights are off in Goldenrod City guess I should be heading off now."Kafuinu would
always stay in one town and the same night would leave.
"Searching and dreaming," Kafuinu spoke again under her breathe,"just dreaming"