Pokemon Sprite Comics

[Raz]

Please tell me what you think of them.
Here are the comics (Copy into paint before reading) Note: Comic 1 and 2 have bland backgrounds.

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/8417/pafsn1.png

Season 1:
Comic 1- A Brief Introduction (http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/774/comic1abriefintroductiofg4.png)
Comic 2- As Lame As A Bannete (http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/9108/comic2aslameasabanneteae5.png)
Comic 3- Food Is Something No-one Can Resist (http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/4695/comic3foodissomethingnowb5.png)
Comic 4- What In The World Is A Luxio? (http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/8008/comic4whatintheworldisazs4.png)
Comic 5- Battle Of The Regions (http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8480/comic5battleoftheregionwl3.png)
Comic 6- Great Battles Create Great Power (http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/6372/comic6greatbattlesbringfb1.png)
Comic 7- Wimps For Henchmen (http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/9061/nothingls6.png)
Comic 8- Nidoking Vs Nidoking (http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/5625/comic8nidokingvsnidokinbs4.png)
Comic 9- Too Tough! (http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6501/comic9toostrongib6.png)
Comic 10- Birth Of The Crazy Hariyama (http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5571/cyuvy4.png)

Season 2:
Comic 11- Makuita Gets A Beating (http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4448/efefefeoq8.png)
Comic 12- The Camrupt That Could Fly (http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/6348/comic12thecameruptthatcsk4.png)
Comic 13- Best Friends (http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/7646/comic13bestfriendszy5.png)
Comic 14- The Appearance Of The First Co-Star (http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/8527/comic14theappearanceoftjy7.png)
Comic 15- The Wrath Of Hariyama (http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/2995/comic15thewrathofhariyarj6.png)
Comic 16- Fun Or Chaos? (http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/7796/wreyt8.png)
Comic 17- The Doorway To Destruction (http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8227/comic17thedoorwaytodestyk7.png)
Comic 18- The Doorway To Destruction Part 2 (http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/8635/comic18thedoorwaytodestkj2.png)

Season 3:
Comic 19- The Virus (http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/3442/comic19thevirusde8.png)
Comic 20- Zombie Attack! (http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5093/comic20zombieattackjn2.png)
Comic 21- The Ultimate Zombie (http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/3255/comic21theultamitezombiqv0.png)
Comic 22- Shuppet Vs Pichu! (http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/4971/shuppetvspichulf4.png)
Comic 23- All Hope Is Lost (http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8720/comic24allhopeislostsl1.png)
Comic 24- Get Ready To Strike (http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/8191/comic24getreadytostrikebh5.png)
Comic 25- Amazing Power (http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/5306/comic25amazingpowerap7.png)
Comic 26- Bannete's New Form! (http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/176/comic26bannetesnewformiq7.png)
Comic 27- The Truth Gets Out (Coming Soon)

Comic Quickies
I Like Blue! (http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/8294/ilikebluedc6.png)
The Ugly (http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8307/theuglykg3.png)

My Spin Off Comic

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/5900/bannearxg1.png

Season 1
Comic 1- The Lost Island (http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/3359/comic1lostonanislandagf2.png)
Comic 2- Terrors Under The Deep (Coming Soon)

Holiday Specails:
April Fools Comic (http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9523/aprilfoolscomickr6.png)

If you want to co-star in my comic just tell me what pokemon or anything else you want to be. If it's a custom pokemon sprite or a non-pokemon sprite you will have to send it me. Your name will be your name in Pi-forums.

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/6380/11778254335849rz3.gif http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4989/11778288091670im5.gif

[xXRushXx]

Good:
1. Some of the jokes are actually pretty funny! (Like that Psycho|Psychic part)
2. The text is readable

Bad:
1. No speech bubbles
2. The first two comics have bland backrounds

Overall I think this would be successful if you add in speechbubbles. Keep it up!

[Raz]

Thanks i'll use the speach bubble idea in my next comics. When I made the first two comics I didn't have backgrounds. Anyway thanks.

[§SilverWing§]

I love your comics Raz because they are funny and really creative!

P.S. I really mean it :)

[Raz]

Thanks Ino but, don't you want to co-star?

[§SilverWing§]

Ok

[Raz]

What pokemon you wanna be.

[§SilverWing§]

hmm......this may make me sound as if I am really addicted to this pokemon which I might be but maybe a vaporeon only one I can think of XD

Also I would like to co-star again sometime

[Raz]

Ok look out for comic 14 which will be called. Comic 14- The Appearance Of The First Co-star. And by the way I thought you would say Vapoureon.

[Kipp]

I WANNA BE IN THE COMIC TOO!!!!MAKE ME A MUDKIP!!!!!!

I liked the april fools one and were nidoking fought himself!PIZZA!!!!!!

MAKE MORE COMMICS!!!!

[Raz]

Ok Kippkipp your in Comic 16- Fun Or Chaos.

Everyone I now how a Spin Off comic called ' The Adventures Of Snover '. I've made comic 1.

[Kipp]

Ok Kippkipp your in Comic 16- Fun Or Chaos.

Everyone I now how a Spin Off comic called ' The Adventures Of Snover '. I've made comic 1.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!HORAY 4 MUDKIPZ!!!!!!yay for snover!!!:D

[Raz]

Oh yeah, kippkipp, you know your in comic 17 also. Snorlax isn't done pounding the hell out of Pickachu. Oh and ino your in it too.

[Link the frozen one]

cool i want to be in one!!! make me a cacturne. thats my fav. lol

[Raz]

Cacturne? I thought it would be an Ice type pokemon. Cool, join the club, Comic 17-Villians Unite. Wow 3 people in one comic!

[Link the frozen one]

ya all of my other favorates are ice but my #1 is cacturne. lol then all of the ice, then scizor. lol.

[Raz]

I like Scizor too. But this isn't really the place to talk about that. I'll have the comic done in not more then two days.

[Link the frozen one]

lol cool

[Sakura]

nice comic, Could I co-star as a Riolu?

[Raz]

Of corse you can. But i'm just not sure which comic to put you in. I'll pm you when I know.

[Kipp]

the comics are funny,i like blue!!!!!!:cool:kool

[Raz]

Thanks kippkipp.

[§SilverWing§]

Im getting really really excited for the next part of your recent comic they are so exciting!

[Raz]

Well do you mean the comics in season 2? I only have 1 more comic to do then season 2 is over. Let me tell you a bit about whats going to happen. Lets just say the most feared creature comes in my comics and they nearly destroy the world. I think season 3 is going to be the best yet!

[§SilverWing§]

Raz, some time can I co-star again?

[Raz]

I've put you in comic 20,21,22 and some future ones.

[Sakura]

Love the new Comics, Raz. Could I mabey Evolve sometime?

[Raz]

Sure at a later comic. You will evolve and help alot.

[Shadowflame3458]

Can I be a Mewtwo zombie? PLEASE?!?

[Sakura]

Thanks, Raz.

[Raz]

Can I be a Mewtwo zombie? PLEASE?!?

WHAT!?!?!? Wow, your the first person who wants to be a bad guy!

Sure, I'll pm you when i've made the comic.

[Prince of Darkness]

Your comics allways look very good, keep it up!

[Raz]

Thanks. Feel free to co-star anytime,

[Prince of Darkness]

I will do, if you don't mind I want to be my favorite pokemon Umbreon if that happens :)

[Raz]

I wouldn't of guessed, lol. Ok then you can be in my very next comic. I'll pm you when its done, if its ok with you.

[Link the frozen one]

the comics are looking great raz

[Raz]

Comic 25 is done. Thanks Umbreunatic, for co-staring, I needed it.

[pkmnMASTER9]

I WANT TO BE IN THIS!!!!!http://Mightyena_Charizard_Art_Mix2.gif

MIGHTYENIZARD!!!

[pkmnMASTER9]

I WANT TO BE IN THIS!!!!!!http://Mightyena_Charizard_art_mix2.gif

Charyena!!!

[pkmnMASTER9]

sorry i posted twice....NVM

[Kipp]

(^ screwed..)da comics are good....banette is ugly

[Raz]

^ Thanks.

[§SilverWing§]

Hey Raz comics are looking great hows the comic Zombie Alert coming along

[Raz]

I remember this, I'll carry one.