Persian and Jigglypuff! the comic!

[Topaz_Mew]

I know I know it aint any good but do me a favor, give me some tips.

http://i17.tinypic.com/2wmnuj6.png

by the way Topaz_Mew is my other name...

Gold travels to a mysterious island. An overworld story.

http://i15.tinypic.com/30wq9w7.png

[Arielle]

The text and panel placement are really sloppy. Try making them all straight and uniform; it'll make it look better. :/
And on the first comic, the backgrounds are a bit plain. But that's just me.

On the second comic, the backgrounds are better than the first, but some of the tiles are a little sloppy. Take time to make it look nice, it'll make it better. :3

I like the big eyes though. Those rock. XD

[Topaz_Mew]

I only have those kind of backgrounds for overworld comics sadly. I try my best but typing is not my best quality.

well heres the 3rd comic. if you wanna be a guest star from now on just ask! (nobody would want to though...)

http://i17.tinypic.com/4700qw3.png

[Avegaille]

You should work on text bubbles (or speech bubbles...) And everything else doesn't seem to make sense for a comic... It doesn't have a decent storyline or anything... =/ And you could probably work on some of the special effects in your comic...

Try viewing my comic (though it's a bit dead and on hiatus) to make you get an idea to how sprite comics actually work... ;D

[Topaz_Mew]

I know I know your comic is great I looked at it before makeing this. mhhrph at least it doesnt make sence im glad. no sence means I dont have to torture people with my awfull stories and whatnot. plus typing is not my best quality. meh might be a while till I put up my next one (if I ever do ...) heh heh heh

http://i9.tinypic.com/2psr2vp.png

[Raz]

good however sometimes it's hard to see the writing.