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thundermew
12-23-2006, 03:18 PM
This story goes in parts, I will post them one at a time, heres part one:

Two Pichu were walking along the road, when they saw something wierd... they didn't know what it was... and they were all confused, so they decided to go inside. The door locked on them and they... were... they were trapped, and they didn't know how to get out, but they didn't worry, they decided to wait until they were finished exploring. When they looked down on their feet, they noticed they were on a moving floor, but if they sticked together, they would be fine, and so they moved as close to each other as possible, but this didn't help (you'll see later in the story). There nicknames were Peeka and Peeko and they were basically twin Pichu.

The moving floor led them into a super fast tunnel... in fact... it went so fast, that they couldn't return back, but it felt great, it was like being on a roller coaster, but they got worried, they had been on it for an hour and still wasn't off, and they were all lonely and scared. "What will we do" said Peeka, with a frightened face, but before Peeko could even answer, a sudden blur appeared, and Peeka was sucked up into some weird dimension. Peeko tried to get back, but nothing could stop the tunnels extreme speed, and then... Peeko as well... was sucked into the dimension too, but landed at the other side of the world and they were separated...


be prepared for the next part of this exciting adventure, because its gonna be fun, I'm sure you'll enjoy the next part of this adventure.

TO BE CONTINUED...

What are you're thoughts so far

Raz
05-12-2007, 05:01 PM
Interesting. This may lead to a very good story. Good work so far.

ino
08-17-2007, 03:24 PM
The story is very good and the pichus have cute names ^_^

roland
08-17-2007, 06:11 PM
yeah i liked it, but you could be more detailed