Rayquaza V.S. Deoxys

[Charizard]

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"....And I'm gonna win everybody in the Battle Tower,right Pikachu?"
"Pika pii!"Pikachu agreeded.Ash had made it to the Hoeen Battle Tower,and he is very excited to start battling at the Battle Tower.
"But Ash!Hold on!"Said Brock.
"What is it,Brock?"Ash asked.
"I heard that when you battle in the Battle Tower,you need a partner."
"Partner?What for?"Asked Ash curoisly.
"Search me.Who are you gonna choose?"Brock asked and dreamed how manny pretty girls will there be at the Battle Tower."Beautiful..."
"Uh uh,Ash,don't choose me!"Said May with a 'Never-Will-I-Do-It-Look'.
"I didn't-whoa!"Ash said and was intterupted by a Pluse and Minun.
"Pluse!Minun!"
"Hey,watch it!"Ash said angrily to the cute but mischeivios Pokemon.
"Ash,aren't they cute?"Asked May with a smile.Before Ash can answer,Pluse and Minun took Ash's hat an ran away.
"Hey!May,they aren't cute!"Ash said and tuned to May with a 'It's-All-Your-Fault' look.Brock didn't did much help-he was dreaming about pretty girls....and Max pulling his ears.
"Ash,Sis,why don't we chase those Pokemon and get your hat back?It's no time to quarrel!"Max said with a 'It's-A-Fact' look.
"You are right,Max!Let's go after those Pokemon!"Ash said.
"Pika pii!"Pikachu agreeded.
"Whatever."May said but chased the Pokemon.
10 min later....
"Huff...huff...these pokemon are nothing but trouble!"Ash said.
"Ash,it's these pokemon are so..so..so cute!"May said.
"Cute?!!I said it's annoying!Now I need to rest."Ash shouted back but when soft again.
"Of course it's cute,Ash."Then a pretty girl came.
"Yeah.."Brock drooled."Yeah...she's cute..."
Later,they got to the Battle Tower after a rest.Ash looked around and found many trainers.
"Hi."Said a Pokemon Trainer."My name is Rachel;and I'm stronger then you!"
Said Rachel proudly."Care for a pokemon battle...weakling?"Rachel laughed.Ash was insulted,but not Brock,May or Max.
"WEAKLING?!!I'M NO WEALKING!Fine,let's battle!Pikachu,go!"Ash sent out Pikachu.
"Pika!"Pikachu said angrly.Pikachu was insulted too.
"Bellosem!"Rachel said.
"Pikachu,tunderblot!"Ash shouted.
"Bellosem!Show him what you have!Sleep powder!"But Pikachu's tunderbolt was too fast and strong-it defeated Bellosem.
"Now who's the weakling?"Ash asked proudly.
"I will-"Rachel said,but intterupted.
"Trainers who have signed up for the next round,please come to the stadium now."Said the loud-speaker.
"I need to go now."Rachel said and escpaced from Ash.
"Great job,Pikachu!"Ash said happily and put Pikachu up.
"Piiiika pii!"Pikachu smiled.
"Now let's sign up for the next round,okay Ash?"Brock asked."I can't resit any of the preety pokemon anymore."
"Okay then,Brock!"Ash said.He was very happy that he deafeted a though trainer like Rachel so fast!But little did they knew who was hiding...
"We gotta get that Pikachu...and Bellosem!"
"Of course we must!"
"Meowth!"It was Team Rocket!
"Now what plan should we use?We used a lot already."Asked James."I'm out of ideas."
"You think I have ANY?!"Jessie shouted back.
"Meowth?!"James and Jessie asked,together.Meowth sank inside.
"Noo...."
~To Be Continued~
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The very above part belongs to Destiney Deoxys,but the rest belong to me.Smart me. :D

[PokéJungle]

Unfortunately, when you're writing fanfics, you shouldn't do just dialogue =/ If this was intended to be a script fic, please clean it up a bit with some stage directions, narration, or something to flesh it into something more than just talking...

It's really hard to read besides~

[Charizard]

"Meowth go no ideas..."Meowth said.
"Alright!"James said.
-Back at Ash's Location-
"Brock,where do I find a parnter?"Ash asked."May-"
"Ash Ketchum!Don't forget you owe me a bike.And I said,I'll never battle!Contest is my style!"Ash was copying May whatever she said."And Ash,stop copying me!"
"Oops!"Ash said and stop immediatly.Ash walked out of the battle tower and found a very weak trainer...

[Charizard]

|Unfortunately, when you're writing fanfics, you shouldn't do just dialogue =/ If this was intended to be a script fic, please clean it up a bit with some stage directions, narration, or something to flesh it into something more than just talking...

It's really hard to read besides~|

Weak at storytelling I tell you,I'm weak at this;just giving a try.

[PokéJungle]

Ok, well I'll be glad to help you with anything you need ^^; I have a really great tutorial at my site for fanfic writing, you should check it out.

http://pokejungle.net/?id=fan/pfwg

It's really good o_o; Frostweaver wrote it, and he rocks XD

[Charizard]

I haven't finish this yet,and I started on 'The Dark Trainers' already.Well,I'm going to continue this story.Story continues in Comic Sans MS font.

At Ash's loctation:
Ash found a trainer.
"Hey!Are you free?"Ash tap on the trainer's shoulder.
"Yes,I am free.How may I help you?"Aske the Trainer and turn to Ash.
"Okay,what is your name?"
"My name is Matt."
"Okay,Matt!Come with me!"Ash shouted and grabbed Matt's hand.
"Whoa!Where are you bringing me?!"Matt asked.
"The Battle Tower!You have Pokemon,right?"And ran off with Matt before he can even answer.Ash entered the battle hall and signed up for the next battle.
"The 'Team Of Blue' V.S. 'The Team Of Red'!!Sorry,two teams had already entered for the next contest!"Said the guy.
"Oh well.Come on,Matt!Let's go to and watch the battle!"Ash said and they ran.
"Hey,May!"Ash said." 'The Team Of Blue' looks like Team Aqua while 'The Team Of Red' looks like Team Magma.Don't you agree?And there there!The one on the right of Team Red looks like the 'Man Of Thousand Faces'!Remember that one?"
"Yes,yes!I do remember and they look like them!"

To be continued...:O_o: