Hoenn Quest

[Josh]

Not one of my best RPGs but a good one to kick things off.

You are a young trainer who lives in the Hoenn region. Once a year, Professor Birch, the local Pokémon Professor, sends out letters to boys and girls who want to get a Pokémon. However, sometimes he cannot hand out enough Pokémon to everyone so you have to wait.
This is finally your day. He has sent a letter. He wants the following information:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
Starter Pokémon:
Other: (Optional)

Will you go around the Hoenn region and fulfil your dreams?

My Sign Up is coming later.

[En-Cu-Kou]

Name: En-Cu-Kou
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: You wouldn't notice me in a crowd. Medium height, gray-blue eyes, brown hair. I usually wear blue denim shorts and a T-shirt. I'm planning to travel with a small brown backpack.
Personality: Quiet and hard-working. I'm usually shy unless I'm with good friends.
Starter Pokemon: Cyndaquil
Background: I just graduated from high school, so I'm thinking of doing something different. Pokemon training seems to be the thing to do since I'm in Hoenn ^_^
BTW, this is my first RPG.... Tell me if I'm doung something wrong.

[Josh]

Name: En-Cu-Kou
Age: 19 years It isn't nessecery for the "years" as it isn normal to be years.
Gender: Male
Appearance: You wouldn't notice me in a crowd. Medium height, gray-blue eyes, brown hair. Bit more?
Personality: Quiet and hard-working Bit more?
Starter Pokemon: Would Cyndaquil be available? E-YES!
Background: I just graduated from high school, so I'm thinking of doing something different. Pokemon training seems to be the thing to do since I'm in Hoenn ^_^
BTW, this is my first RPG.... Tell me if I'm doung something wrong.

Check out my edits.

[battlebruvaz]

Name: isaac
Age: 13
Gender: male
Appearance: tall, black haired, always wears trade mark cap, blue eyes, some freckles, almost ALWAYS has thought lines on face, sometimes sketches so may be seen with sketchbook. slightly pale as of not venturing outside much, wears jeans, one of those t-shirts with the lond arms attached (not the long sleeve t-shirt the other one...) cracks knuckles agressively when about to battle or when angry.
Personality: agressive, good sense of humor, doesnt make friends easily, dark, mysterious, has trouble controlling temper, has been known to cause serious damage to certain things (cough) windows (cough) not very social and is usually on the computer every chance he gets. he thinks that contests are childish and is a bit of a pyro-maniac...
Starter Pokémon: treeko
Other: was orrigonally from a far off continent (will be in a RPG on my site some day!) and has just moved to hoenn in time to get the letter from birch.

(better? also, will not post for two weeks caus ill be on holiday. sorry! ill be posting when i get back.)

[Josh]

Well if no one locks this for the age, could you add a bit more into the Description and Personality?

I don't know if I'll go through with this though...

[battlebruvaz]

back. so. is it anybetter with it edited?