Chibi Pika's submissions

[Chareon]

More submissions, but these aren't mine, I asked some people if they would like to contribute and I got back a yes. ChibiPika gave me permission to use these.
Here's the link to their thread (http://serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?t=80448)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/ChibiPika/Verdegon2.png
Sadly, this one isn't from scratch, I got a bit of help from Absol, Charizard, and Houndoom, but I hope it looks original. Now for its data:
#011 Verdegon
Type: Vicious Pokémon
Element: Dragon/Fire
Ht: 5’11”
Wt: 216 lbs.
Ability: Levitate
Evolution: Lizerde-->(Lv. 25) Verdegon

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/ChibiPika/Wallarooby.png
#025 Wallarooby
Type: Wallaby Pokemon
Element: Normal/Flying
Ht: 5'1"
Wt: 126 lbs.
Ability: Inner Focus
Evolution: Waiby-->(Lv. 26)Wallarooby

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/ChibiPika/Reynile.gif
Yep, my first and, actually my least favorite custom, the infamous Reynile is back for a curtain call. I've been considering redoing this one...
#041 Reynile
Type: Desert Pokémon
Element: Ground/Ancient
Ht: 4’10”
Wt: 129 lbs.
Ability: Sand Stream
Evolution: None

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v607/ChibiPika/Zapiston.png
I really don't like the tail. It's supposed to be zigzagged like Raichu's, only smaller, and with more zigs, if you know what I mean. Any suggestions? (I could scan a drawn pic to show what it really looks like.)
#051 Zapiston
Type: Hound Pokémon
Element: Dark/Electric
Ht: 5’4”
Wt: 360 lbs.
Ability: Intimidate
Evolution: Foreston-->(Lv. 30)-->Howlon-->(Lv.50)-->Zapiston

ChibiPika says that she will send me their personality and is still doing evolutions.

[K-dawG]

I think there really good there nice sprites and it looks like you've put alot of work into them

[Novacaine]

They're very nice. I like the Reynile..it's position draws me to it. The Wallarooby is nice to, and very nicely mixed. ^_^

There's just a few problems, though. On the Wallarooby, the shading on the stomach is a bit flat. Try making that straight line going across it's stomach more curved, to show thecurves of the mix's stomach. Plus, I htink it looks a bit odd with the wings..but that's just me. ^^;; Personally, I think spikes would look nicer. It's your sprite, so do with it as you will.

The Shading on the Reynile is perfect! I love the blend of colors. If you want it to be more like an official sprite, try to use only three colors. One being the base color, and the other two being colors for the shadows. Also, the outline is one color. Notice how, if you zoom up close enough, you can see that a majority of the lines are black, with an incredibly dark shade of the pokemon's base color dappled here and there? Try going back and fixing that. Plus, the shading on the wings on it's head is absent..so you may want to put in shading there.

Verdegon isn't showing up at all on my monitor. o_o;; Check the link.
Zapiston needs to be shaded in a bit differently. The current way is fine, but it looks a bit flat. Plus, the zigs look a bit more like Hophip's ridges, so instead of using Mew's tail, try using Mewtwo's or Persain's since they're a bit thicker at the end. Or, you could just use Raichu's. ^_^;;