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Luka
09-02-2005, 02:22 AM
Wow I'm the first person to ever post in the poetry corner, anywho here it is. It's also on Pokecommunity aswell........


The Silver Moon Caresses your hair and your light is fire,
It's the only Dream that could be made a reality,
I keep tryin to understand you but to no avail,
need I explain myself to you and you to me,
Maybe one day it will come and take me away,
but until then I'll keep guessing......
Guessing what the world throws in my ever twisting path,
but until I find the answer, I leave with this edict:
Your actions are as pure as Natures blind wrath,
you could never understand why what is what.....
:::End:::

Suggestions? Comments? I'm open to it.

bgtfamily
09-02-2005, 06:09 AM
nice... I <3 it... umm, I didn't really see any problems or anything I thought needed to be changed... keep up the good work? :P

Cookie Monster
09-03-2005, 12:23 AM
I don't have much to say but that I liked it. Nice job.